Tuesday, November 15
The Rain
Rain, rain and
More rain
Rupturing,
Shuddering
Blue heavens
Crying,
Frying,
Trying
Phobia--
Exploding
Upholding
Nostalgia
Wanting,
Lusting,
Weltering
With each drop
Of rain
"I need you"
Name::AyyA
From::Kuwait
I AM WHO I AM AS I ARRIVE AT YOUR DOOR WHETHER I COME OR I GO IS NOT UP TO ME FOR I HAVE LOST SIGHT OF ALL DESIRE "Walled Garden of Truth",Hakim Sanai
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5 Comments:
Man you are good ;) Perfect ryme, length and speed. I'm jelous
Uncanny the effect of the rain on us today. We are really thirsting for winter, aren't we?
Elegance
You jealous? If I didn’t know you better I would’ve believed you :*
Lady J
It is amazing, check Wallada’s :)
Dear AyyA,
I always want to comment on your blog... to let you know that I am reading it and enjoying it... but at times I have nothing to say..
Like now.. I am speechless.
Truly,
Misguided
P.S. Are you really hurting like that? I just figured you were over it all... and all stronger now..
Thanks misguided, that was really flattering especially when it came from you. Knowing your taste in poetry :). And it is also nice to know the effect of one’s work on his/her readers, glad that you commented. And don’t worry dear about me, I’m very strong, it’s just the rain.
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