Tuesday, April 5
Love is in the AirI want you to know
Flesh, Lime and Jasmine united
With a pinch of a Musky scent
Still floating in the air
Long after you departed
Bantering touch all over me;
A kiss here, a caress there
A wraith in the dark is following me
Relentless to keep me alighted
Your scent, your touch
Your very sole taste
Connive as such
To keep me delighted
Subtle and serine you leave me be
As if we have never parted
Such sweetness I will ensue
Till the day we’re back united
Know this
Only for you
My utmost bliss:
Forever and ever I am indebted
For this flare that you ignited
Amore by Andrew Gonzalez
Name::AyyA
From::Kuwait
I AM WHO I AM AS I ARRIVE AT YOUR DOOR WHETHER I COME OR I GO IS NOT UP TO ME FOR I HAVE LOST SIGHT OF ALL DESIRE "Walled Garden of Truth",Hakim Sanai
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mm I love musk, it's one of my favorite scents ;) Lovely poem as usual Ayya ;)
OK Ayya you are officially driving me to the brink of maddness with visions of love and sensuality, which are rarely combined. I WANT, I will keep my eyes open. though I need them for books and when I try to look far I squint like an idiot but I will try to look attractive oggling a guy with squished eyes. SOOOOON SOOOON pretty boys are waiting for meeeeeee.! Oh I know I will just say come closer come closer closer I say you foooool.
ouch! i liked it.
Mmmmm..lucky to love and know passion, AyyA
at last something other than that ugly face of Tab'ta'ba'ey man he's face is scary!
I love the poem and I wanna feel love like you beautifully described it in your poem...akh ya galbi ;)
Allah allah
nice poem
Peach
Thanks dear, Musk is good for your skin too
Beatnik
You crazy girls, you don’t actually have to have a relationship to be able to feel love, it’s just in the air, live your imagination woman and some day it will all come true.
Flamingoliya
Hi Flam, glad to see you here, welcome
The Expert
You won on this one buddy, love is the air indeed. And the stanza was beautiful, every day I learn something new from you :)
DJ
Thanks sweetie, that’s coz you are sooooooooo romantic ;)
Jewaira
Ah, Jewara, nothing is like love, any kind of love, but I got the meaning in your sentence ;)
Jelly Belly
Salamat galbich 7ayati, let yourself be, and you will feel love.
مبتدئ
Will you care to compose it on your 3ood? :)
Ayya
3ood?!
Who said I play the Oud.. ?
Bas 7ata loo 3ala Box chibareet Ala7in-ha
;)
Hey you say crazy girls to me?you implying am schezo?LOL man you know I love all around an hate too little if ever. am so positive it make poeple sick.mmmmmm am always caching you at the wrong time I feel so foolish......sorry.was a little anxious. I live in serenety what to do and am loved so much i hate to disapoint myself and others( just last night I decided to pout and sulk instead of laughing like an idiot and my dad comments saying no that is not right, i say I have a right to have atleast one day tha is dark no?and well that made me laugh AGAIN). And thats is all because i love them soooo much the ones on my mind.I can smell your poem too really I do.
Mobtadi
Some little birdie told me that you do ;)
Beatnik
Crazy in my vocabulary is good; otherwise it’s boring, right? And you have the right to sulk once and a while, after all you are human. Keep the positive feelings girl you’ll never regret it :)
3ood?
Astaghfirulla
Salmeli 3al Birdie
Mobtadi
:)
Analytically Adversed
People, who have this need to write, are usually more sensitive and attentive to things than others, I do live every minute of it, but I need to stay in that level, that’s why I need to write it, it’s like playing music during a certain phase, whenever you replay it, it begets all your senses of that phase. To answer your questions I have to refer you to one of my old posts.
http://3asal.blogspot.com/2005/01/inspirers-of-my-love-poems.html#comments
Thank you sweetheart, glad to know you enjoyed it, I kinda felt guilty in my last post and wanted to make it up to you :)
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