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Friday, February 4

Inside the Dragon's Den

Thought of today
" A mouse found one single grain of salt and felt himself to be a grocer"

One of my poet buddies sent me this poem to review. He said that he wrote this poem in a few seconds. I do believe him. The verses seem so easily flown; it portrayed nature in the raw. And I'm sure if he had given himself time for more revision, he would've ended up with a completely different poem, which would not reveal half as much truth as displayed in this one.
And I was wondering how men would react to it. And what other women thought about it. That's why I asked his permission to post it on my blog.

Men; don't miss it. I'm sure you can all relate ;)
Women; LOL

I'm a stud

Men should just laugh
when life don't seem fair
How we master the "comb over"
when we're losing our hair

But sometimes we're lazy
so we just wear a hat
And we say we're just healthy
when the fact is we're fat

We think we're athletic
But we're no "Willie Mays"
When backyard football
leaves us sore for three days

All men are cocky
but we shouldn't be proud
And think we are "porn stars"
when we're not well endowed!

All women want us
at least in our mind
If we saw things more twisted
we'd be "legally" blind

See life has it's "humor"
if we do more than glance
So I'm thankful each day
...to be given the chance

copyright: dale coffman

"The Dragon's Den" by James cambell

Posted by AyyA:: at :: 7:05 PM::

4 Comments:

Jewaira said...: Funny & lighthearted :); 11:38 PM
Unknown said...: I liked it but founded a bit cynical; 11:23 AM
Jelly Belly said...: I likey...cute and fun.; 11:42 AM
AyyA said...: Girls: ;)

Mosan
Cynical? Are you sure? At least you had the courage to comment, not like others I know ;); 3:24 AM