Thursday, September 14
Toxic LoveHe:
Ask me to nourish you with passion till eternity
In mortal terms
And beyond immortality
Allow me to pave your pavement
With riches of roses from robust estates
Merciful to your fragile tread
Accept the ample services
Of a humble slave at your door
Begging for your forgiveness
Please; reign the jewel-studded peacock throne
Of this extravagant heart
And be its sole queen
But don’t ask me to leave I beg you
This decision is not mine to take
The oath was made by destiny
You are my everything
And I can’t stop
Loving you
She:
Sufferings of one lifetime surpassed eternity
And suspended my mortal being for years
Leaving nothing for immortality
Your thorns bled the sole of my essence
Whirling my path through a whirlwind
Into a lost continent cursed with drought
Where your ample services seized
All what I have and swapped my identity
To that of a beggar at your door
Estranged in your lavish palaces
Sad and empty in
Solitary confinement
Set me free I beg you
One mistake cost me a lifetime
And contrived my destiny
I’m left with nothing
And your love is
Su
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ca
ting
Me
Name::AyyA
From::Kuwait
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22 Comments:
simply
great post
and converting the real life
WoooooW, i am inspired thank you sweet AyyA… you are the best ;)
here i am..
as i come to your doorstep asking for forgiveness..
for all what my kind caused you..
for all the pains..
and all the sorrows..
should you give me one last chance??
i will be what you always wanted!!
once very long ago..
i gave you my life..
my body..
my soul
i gave you everything a girl could ever give..
till i had nothing to give no more..
looked around,,
found a dagger, a rose
and a note said you’re gone..
time has passed..
your kind tried helping..
yet my heart was insecure..
i burnt the rose..
gave the note to everyone
dare to propose..
but kept the dagger..
for i knew,,
you’ll be back..
wanna watch me decompose?!
Thanks Mishari, and btw; this was based on a true story.
NewMe
Hey that was great, I’m so happy to be the source of inspiration to others as others are to me at time, not all though, you are one of those.
Keep up the good work, no matter what agonies we go through, poetry always soothes and compensates. Bravo
Waw..
The sweetest thing I ever read.
You couldn't have put it in any better way!
Revise the link on your new blog address in the entry above.
You have a double h
hhttp
it should be http
Phoenix
Thanx sweetie
Lady J
THANK DEAR
Hi Ayya;
This comments is related to the subject (Talag Ba2in) posted at Sundy,17 september:
I agree with you we should declare the Talag Ba2in against those selfish ignorant people and looking for the shiny side of the life.
Listen to David G Kelly what he says to his wife:
A gentle word like a spark of light,
Illuminates my soulAnd as each sound goes deeper,
It's YOU that makes me whole
There is no corner, no dark place,
YOUR LOVE cannot fill
And if the world starts causing waves,
It's your devotion that makes them still
And yes you always speak to me,
In sweet honesty and truth
Your caring heart keeps out the rain,
YOUR LOVE, the ultimate roof
So thank you my Love for being there,
For supporting me, my life
I'll do the same for you, you know,
My Beautiful, Darling Wife.
The Expert
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Wow, nice but too complex for me to understand I guess. Or maybe I understand but in my simple terms: he is bothering her being a whimp, she is playing games with him for the whimp he is. I hope I understood right lol.
Cheers AyyA!
Sal3am
Not exactly LOL, I guess if you read the title it will explain. This is a one-sided love affair. He’s insisting to keep his lover although he doesn’t know how to treat her well, she’s not in love with him and wants her freedom. :D
Ayya where r u ?.. i miss ur comments in my blog ... i hope that u r good .. :)
fahad from kuwait
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Great post .. thanks
hI Ayya
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and will not be the last
SHAH
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3qbaal ma testemer hal blog oo t9er o7fora geologia ;p
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تحياتي
هلا افياء
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حياك
عشقت كلماتك
سهله ونابعه من القلب
احسست بالوحدة بسببك
شكرا نيكدبوي
و أسفه للوحده التي سببتها الكلمات لك
و هي بالفعل نابعة من القلب و مكتوبة بدمه
تحياتي
dear Ayya....wow its great. one feel lost in the depth of this poem. Naresh Dhiman
Thanks Naresh, glad you liked it
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